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The Boys Behind Lemonades an open source story by Yousef A. Mustafa (q8bkman)
Once upon a time in a far away land, there lived three children with different visions of how the world should be. Even from an early age, their perspectives were seen through their everyday lives. The first child was Billy, a silly little billy boy who thought the world should be ran by capitalism. Even his diaper had a '$' sign on it. When he made lemonade, he sold it for a buck, but kept his recipe and ingredients to himself. Unfortunately, it always came out a little sour. Little billy never knew what went wrong. Then, there was another child neighboring Billy, his name was Steve. Little Stevy was also a capitalist like his rival Billy, he too sold his lemonade for money. However, Stevy had more in mind than just to make a little profit. He thought if he could make a buck, why not two? That's when he started selling his lemonade for ten times what Billy was asking. He too kept his recipe a secret. Sadly, there was also something wrong with his lemonade, it always came out a little too sweet. Still the kids came and bought from both of Billy and Stevy, making them the richest kids in the neighborhood. Then, there was this little kid, who was the youngest of them all. He didn't like Billy's lemonade because it was bitter, and he didn't enjoy Stevy's sweet rich lemonade since it was too expensive and sweet. That's when he decided to make his own lemonade. Like most children, he made it using everything available at home. So he decided not to sell his lemonade, but share it with others. His idea was to share everything he had, even his ingredients for making the lemonade. When kids said that it didn't taste as good as Billy and Stevy's, he showed them his recipe and they helped him fix it. With some changes, his lemonade was the best in no time. His name was Linus. Many of the neighborhood's kids went to Billy to buy lemonade. The snobby kids went to Stevy, showing others that they had class and money to spend. Although many kids stayed away from the free lemonade, Linus still had his faithful friends, one of which was little Richy. Richy supported his friend's idea of sharing instead of selling. Even at an early age, little Richy had a beard. The lemonade business was just an example of who they were. From the daily activities the three did, anyone could see who they really were inside. When being invited to a party, the kids would put on a show in different rooms. Linus always offered a free pass, and would always hold the door for his audience to come in. Whereas Stevy would never miss such an opportunity; he would open the door a little, and ask for payment first. Billy was a little clumsy. His glasses would always fall out of place when he tried to run, holding onto his diaper. That's why they always closes the door before he enters. Little Billy would often be sad at first, but then he notices that they left a window open.
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SIGTERMer
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« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2010, 06:16:57 AM » |
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this truth needs to be "shared" with others, so that history can be accurate once again 
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Q8BKman
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« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2010, 07:34:36 AM » |
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this truth needs to be "shared" with others, so that history can be accurate once again  GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT!! FEEEEEEL FREEEEEE 2 SHARE IT WITH ANY 1note: this story is open source-able, meaning you can change whatever you want. also, i mean no offence to any one in writing this. Peace
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« Last Edit: February 09, 2010, 10:23:44 AM by Q8BKman »
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« Reply #3 on: February 10, 2010, 12:51:45 AM » |
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it seems that the geekism started to effect on you too.. Poor mind =.= It sucks!
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« Reply #4 on: February 10, 2010, 12:45:38 PM » |
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it seems that the geekism started to effect on you too.. Poor mind =.= It sucks!
Then, simply, you understood NOTHING
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Two things will never let you down in this life: 1. Islam 2. Linux & Geekism
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« Reply #5 on: February 10, 2010, 12:46:58 PM » |
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it seems that the geekism started to effect on you too.. Poor mind =.= It sucks!
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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2010, 06:29:03 PM » |
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lol but i think it effected u too since u got the msg they were sending
what do you mean by "they"... ;|
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« Reply #7 on: February 11, 2010, 12:07:41 AM » |
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lol but i think it effected u too since u got the msg they were sending
what do you mean by "they"... ;| yeah, what do you mean "you people"?
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« Reply #8 on: February 11, 2010, 12:02:26 PM » |
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lol but i think it effected u too since u got the msg they were sending
what do you mean by "they"... ;| yeah, what do you mean "you people"?
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« Reply #9 on: February 11, 2010, 12:14:48 PM » |
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lol but i think it effected u too since u got the msg they were sending
what do you mean by "they"... ;| yeah, what do you mean "you people"?
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« Reply #10 on: February 11, 2010, 02:18:12 PM » |
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« Reply #11 on: February 11, 2010, 07:17:33 PM » |
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ha! I got you totally speechless!
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« Reply #12 on: February 12, 2010, 02:56:48 AM » |
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ha! I got you totally speechless! lol....not really i just couldn't remmeber it's name but now i do so it's name is tropic thunder, maybe now u remember it
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« Reply #13 on: February 12, 2010, 04:22:02 AM » |
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ha! I got you totally speechless! lol....not really i just couldn't remmeber it's name but now i do so it's name is tropic thunder, maybe now u remember it screw the movie, i'm talking about this story! I wrote it last monday, and it's entitled: "The Boys behind Lemonade."
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« Reply #14 on: February 12, 2010, 04:24:53 AM » |
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it seems that the geekism started to effect on you too.. Poor mind =.= It sucks!
in what world did you interpute that geekism is "starting to effect" me? I wrote about killing inocent people in "Bombutachakua: Brutal King", does that make me a madman? I wrote "being grey" does that mean I'm born with a birth defeact? wtf sister!!!
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